Monday 5th september 2016
We are learning how to write a persuasive piece of writing.
The Three Little Pigs.
I strongly agree the wolf is the victim in this story of The Three Little Pigs. I will produce written evidence to prove myself.
The wolf is the real victim to my story, the wolf had a question to asked the little pigs and the little pigs ignored him so that’s why the wolf huffed and puffed their house down.
The wolf was trying to make friends.With one of the pigs but this pig was mean to the wolf.He used nasty words and told the wolf to go away.This made the wolf angry.
So the wolf went to the other pigs house to make friends.The wolf used his manners by knocking on the door and asking politely if he could come in but the pigs got cheeky and said no go away to the wolf.The wolf asks politely again but the still wouldn’t open the door.So the wolf left feeling very sad and angry.
When the wolf left the three little pigs started dancing and singing tormenting the wolf because they wouldn’t open the door for him.The pigs were bullies
In my conclusion is the three little pigs were just nasty to the wolf.All the wolf wanted was to be friends with them.The wolf didn’t do anything to the pigs.
But he was labeled as the bad guy when in actual fact he isn't.
By Tyrell Wallace